ext_46556 ([identity profile] bunsen-h.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] pameladean 2014-10-22 01:31 am (UTC)

Ooh, I'm looking forward to this. The current title isn't very appealing, but nothing great is coming to mind immediately. Mend Your Ways probably wouldn't catch the prospective market. :-)

Then I gave the story to my critique group, who had a number of pointed comments about muddy parts, which we have tried to clear up, at least to the extent that we did not want them to be muddy.

I remember being at a room party at a Fourth Street or Minicon, years'n'years ago, showing you a fiddle toy consisting of three linked rings. You asked how to solve it and I told you that it was just a fiddle toy that looked like a puzzle; it didn't have a solution. You called out, "Look, Pat, it's a Mike Ford toy!"

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