I liked it all right when I turned it in. However, when I was doing the major cuts and removing entire groups of characters, part of my brain started wondering what those people were doing, since they hadn't come to Heathwill. (This is Arry's family.) And I figured out what they're doing and it's actually really amazing and wonderful. So I couldn't put them back in. Indeed, their stories at Heathwill were only dimly sketched out, and now that they have different stories there's room to develop the actual main line of events more thoroughly. So alas, that version is now alternate history.
Low levels are fine. It all adds up. Not being able to support with money but spreading the word is also great.
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Date: 2016-07-12 04:31 am (UTC)Low levels are fine. It all adds up. Not being able to support with money but spreading the word is also great.
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