A few thousand words
Nov. 28th, 2003 01:31 pmNo, it's not what you think, I haven't written that much.
I don't feel much like writing, so if you click on this link:
http://www.dd-b.net/dd-b/SnapshotAlbum/data/2003/index.html
... and then click on "Mary's 80th Birthday" and "Thanksgiving," the last two folders at the moment, you can
see what I've been up to.
The rest is very slow writing on both books, conversations with Eric on the inadequate telephone, time with
David and with Raphael and with cats; laundry, dishes, political despair, you know, the usual.
And I'm rereading the Lymond Chronicles by Dorothy Dunnett, on the very thin excuse that they have a
vaguely Liavekan flavor. After so many years and readings I'm finally seeing a few cracks here and
there, the creation of false suspense, the juggling of viewpoints to conceal information. But the good
subtleties and the humor are still there, too.
Pamela
I don't feel much like writing, so if you click on this link:
http://www.dd-b.net/dd-b/SnapshotAlbum/data/2003/index.html
... and then click on "Mary's 80th Birthday" and "Thanksgiving," the last two folders at the moment, you can
see what I've been up to.
The rest is very slow writing on both books, conversations with Eric on the inadequate telephone, time with
David and with Raphael and with cats; laundry, dishes, political despair, you know, the usual.
And I'm rereading the Lymond Chronicles by Dorothy Dunnett, on the very thin excuse that they have a
vaguely Liavekan flavor. After so many years and readings I'm finally seeing a few cracks here and
there, the creation of false suspense, the juggling of viewpoints to conceal information. But the good
subtleties and the humor are still there, too.
Pamela
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Date: 2003-11-28 01:34 pm (UTC)Pamela
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Date: 2003-11-28 08:24 pm (UTC)Re: A few thousand words
Date: 2003-11-28 07:10 pm (UTC)mmh, dorothy dunnett.
Re: A few thousand words
Date: 2003-11-29 10:49 am (UTC)As for Dunnett, wow, this is the very first time I've been able to read the books without coming utterly under their spell. I can see how she's learning as she goes. The Niccolo books are a lot more polished.
This X-ray vision stuff will fade after a few readings and I'll be re-enchanted, but I'm hoping to learn a little bit in the meantime.
Pamela
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Date: 2003-11-29 06:49 am (UTC)How odd. When I think of the possibility of re-reading them it feels like setting off on a voyage I'm not strong enough for because there would be such a lot of portages.
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Date: 2003-11-29 10:50 am (UTC)Pamela
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Date: 2003-11-29 10:54 am (UTC)Pamela
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Date: 2003-12-02 12:37 pm (UTC)Dunnett
Date: 2003-12-03 09:04 am (UTC)I think I waited too long to read THE RINGED CASTLE and CHECKMATE--I was no longer under Dunnett's spell, even partially, and I enjoyed them a lot less. In CHECKMATE, I found myself annoyed that so many yentas were required to get Francis and Phillipa together.
I like the trick where "person who knows least" is pov character, though--I haven't tried it yet, but I want to, once I figure out exactly what I want to use it for. Sort of like a toy I haven't unwrapped yet.
And I'm looking forward to reading the Niccolo books.
Re: Dunnett
Date: 2003-12-06 04:34 pm (UTC)I read the Lymond Chronicles for the first time this year, and though I felt I learned some things about pov from them, I also saw the tricks she used to manipulate sympathy for Francis or otherwise.
What I kept wondering was whether she thought I was smarter than I am. Some things seem much more transparent now than when I first read the books. I am not much really for narrative lust, the mere charging through to find out what happens, but she really had a way of infecting me with that impulse.
My eye is too critical now, I guess. I did manage to lose myself in them a few times, even when I knew the story was over the top, as when Richard is taking care of Francis at the end of the first one.
I'm a hapless sucker for all those scenes. They do still work for me; I don't care, it's a different universe.
I think I waited too long to read THE RINGED CASTLE and CHECKMATE--I was no longer under Dunnett's spell, even partially, and I enjoyed them a lot less. In CHECKMATE, I found myself annoyed that so many yentas were required to get Francis and Phillipa together.
That's a pity; I think CASTLE may be the best novel of them all, overall, and my personal favorite is undoubtedly CHECKMATE, despite some personal dubiety about the assumptions made therein concerning sexual desire or its bottling-up. I don't like what happened to Jerott and Marthe either; it seems to me that if any character is built up and then knocked down for the requirements of plot, it's Jerott.
I like the trick where "person who knows least" is pov character, though--I haven't tried it yet, but I want to, once I figure out exactly what I want to use it for. Sort of like a toy I haven't unwrapped yet.
I don't think there's anything wrong with it at all per se; I'm not entirely comfortable with the ways in which Dunnett uses it. Then again, sometimes I think it's all worth it for the few scenes from Lymond's viewpoint that we do get, notably the one after the gorgeous scene at the Office of Masks and Revels.
And I'm looking forward to reading the Niccolo books.
I haven't any settled reactions to those yet, but the writing is certainly much better (not that I didn't linger happily over many, many scenes in the Lymond books), the entire treatment of everything more subtle. I found the story itself less absorbing until about the fourth volume, but I believe this was primarily because I had no idea what it was. I'm a very stupid first reader, which at least leads to a lot of enjoyment on rereading.
Pamela
Re: Dunnett
Date: 2003-12-08 11:42 am (UTC)Narrative lust. Yes. Either the third or the fourth book, I read until 4:00 am and DIDN'T EVEN NOTICE. If I could figure out how Dunnett did that, I'd be in clover.
I'm a hapless sucker for all those scenes. They do still work for me; I don't care, it's a different universe.
I lost myself at the time, then afterwards, I laughed at myself self-consciously.
That's a pity; I think CASTLE may be the best novel of them all, overall
For thematic reasons? Or something else? I'd be interested to hear why. I could see how well it hung together, all the parts working smoothly, but the migraines annoyed me; they seemed too convenient, and that spoiled my pleasure a bit. I also wanted to beat on Francis a few times for how he treated Phillipa, but I guess that's par for the course when reading this series, so shouldn't have been a factor!
Then again, sometimes I think it's all worth it for the few scenes from Lymond's viewpoint that we do get, notably the one after the gorgeous scene at the Office of Masks and Revels.
I love his pov. For all his cleverness, he's not very clever about himself in many ways.